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shana wrote
on March 10th, 2008 at 06:47 pm

Pretty prose is all very well and good, but it can interfere with the story.

Do you want someone to admire your elegant phrasing, or do you want them to be so caught up in the story they can't put the book down? The former usually precludes the latter.

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