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  • May. 8th, 2008 at 10:54 PM
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Well, I finished the book I was reading. And now I have nothing to do except be twitchy and think about what I need to be writing tomorrow. And the stuff I have sitting around unfinished that I could be finishing.

Which means its time for the First Lines Meme, in which I list the opening bits of all my works in progress, as a sort of public accountability.






1.
Posthumous Jonson: A Novel of the Promethean Age

Westminster
1637

I loved you not.

And having writ, I hear you mock reply: "I was the more deceived." Those words do vouchsafe no revelation, for you loved me no better in your time. But for the sake of him we buried these score years gone, I will write you now.

Make it what you will.


2.
Unsuitable Metal: A Novel of the Promethean Age

We shall never surrender and even if, which I do not for the moment believe, this island or a large part of it were subjugated and starving, then our empire beyond the seas, armed and guarded by the British Fleet, will carry on the struggle until in God's good time the New World with all its power and might, sets forth to the liberation and rescue of the Old.

   --Winston Churchill, Speech before Commons, June 4, 1940

New York City
June 16th
A.D. 1940

Mrs. Cornelius stalked into the mahogany-paneled reception room, a jacket matching her chocolate trousers slung over her shoulder like the mantle of a queen, tiny emerald studs glinting in her ears like the eyes of a snake.  She'd practiced that walk, been coached in that walk: it was Zenobia's stride, in her rattling chain mail.  Which simply weighed a thousand pounds, and felt like wet velvet on my skin, darling.  And had given her a rash in the heat of the Southern California desert sun.


3.
One-Eyed Jack & the Suicide King: A Novel of the Promethean Age

Las Vegas,
Summer, 2002

It's not a straight drop.

Rather, the Dam is a long sweeping plunge of winter-white concrete: a dress for a three-time Las Vegas bride without quite the gall to show up in French lace and seed pearls. If you face Arizona, Lake Mead spreads out blue and alien on your left hand, inside a bathtub ring of limestone and perchlorate drainage from wartime titanium plants. Unlikely as canals on Mars, all that azure water rimmed in red and black rock. The likeness to an alien landscape is redoubled by the Dam's louvered concrete intake towers. At your back is the Hoover Dam visitor's center, and on the lake side sit two art-deco angels, swordcut wings thirty feet tall piercing the desert sky, their big toes shiny with touches for luck


4.
Patience & Fortitude: A Novel of the Promethean Age

And if any gaze on our rushing band,
We come between him and the deed of his hand,
We come between him and the hope of his heart.
--W. B. Yeats, "The Hosting of the Sidhe."

Faith in their hands shall snap in two,
And the unicorn evils run them through;

--Dylan Thomas, "And Death Shall Have No Domion"

This is magic, this is what magic is:
Grief too terrible to be borne.
— John M. Ford, "A Holiday in the Park"


New York City
Autumn, 2004


Nothing made Matthew hate himself more than waiting for the elevator.


5.
By the Mountain Bound (Edda of Burdens 2)

in bondage now bides
the Wolf, 'til world's end
--Lokasenna


Fear. I know the scent of old.

It lifts my hackles. A band--an old fetter half-broken--galls my throat when I stretch too far, breathe too deep. I am accustomed. There is more news on the wind. Mortal woman. And a mortal man. They prey on their own.


6.
The Sea Thy Mistress (Edda of Burdens 3)

Breathless.

The sea air smelled of electricity. But rising from seven thousand feet below, it had no chance of cutting the overripe perfume of blossoms coating mountain air with a thickness like silence. A waiting silence, like the first morning of the world.


7.
A Treachery of Princes (Another book set in the Eddas world)

On the first sunny day of Spring, Vladimir Karl Wilhelm Alexander, Prince of Freimarc, came to his father's father's fortress for the only time in his short sixteen years. He did not come willing.


8.
Chill (Jacob's Ladder 2)

When a great ship is in harbor and moored, it is safe, there can be no doubt. But... that is not what great ships are built for.
--Clarissa Pinkola Estés, Ph.D., Letter To A Young Activist During Troubled Times

The first hint of returning sensation was the icy tickle of fluid dropping across his lids, lashes, nostrils. Pain followed after; the tidal roll of hurt along his body, injury severe enough that his symbiont could neither heal nor silence it.



9.
Bone and Jewel Creatures

Deformed fingers angled from Bijou's palms as if someone had bent them aside, slowly and under great heat and pressure. She walked--or rather shuffled--with a bride's hesitation step, so her movements seemed a parody. Seventy years a Wizard of  Messaline--the market of all roads, the city of jackals--had left their mark.



10.
"Shadow Unit: Wind-Up Boogeyman"

"Well, it's a swell means of getting rid of a body, I'll give the bastard that."




11.
"Shadow Unit: Smoke & Mirrors"

"Close your eyes and hold out your hand," she said. "No, doofus, palm up. Hasn't anyone ever given you anything?"

The silence dragged because he thought it was better if he didn't answer. And because after a moment, she figured it out and let the question drop.


12.
Untitled Sebastien novella which needs a title real damned soon now thanks (ETA: It may be titled Seven for a Secret. Still working.)

The secret to getting away with murder is to tell no living soul. The secret to getting away with lying is to believe with all your heart.



13.
"On Safari in R'lyeh and Carcosa with Gun and Camera"

"We wouldn’t be having this conversation if you'd flunked Algebra."



14.
"Smile"

It's harder to get good roles when you're dead.



15.
"The Death of Terrestrial Radio"

The first word was meant to be spoken quietly, if it should ever be spoken at all. A dribble of signal. An echo. A ghost. A coded trickle, something some PC running SETI-at-home would pick out of the background noise, flag, and return silently, the machine's owner innocent of his role in making history.



16.
"The Red in the Sky is Our Blood"

Detroit still didn't have much in the way of public transportation. The decayed streets were bad enough in cars; For Cadie on her bike, they were often impassable.



There. Maybe that will shake something loose.

(Yeah, I know, some of those I have been working on for years already. That's par for the course.)

Comments

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[info]rahaeli wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
"On Safari in R'lyeh and Carcosa with Gun and Camera"

I nominate this for most awesome title ever.
[info]inaurolillium wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 04:32 am (UTC)
Seconded!
[info]technomom wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 03:08 am (UTC)
Wow. That's impressive.

Um, is this a bad time to ask about the source of the "ship" quote for Chill? I've always seen it credited to William G.T. Shedd. I've seen something similar credited to Mark Twain, too. Maybe Estes was quoting?
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 11:38 am (UTC)
It's Estes. You can read her letter on line.
[info]msagara wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 03:58 am (UTC)
Just out of curiosity, at what stage are all these partials? I know you've said in the past you need to have a lot of stuff on the go, but this is oh-my-god impressive, and not a little intimidating o.o
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 11:52 am (UTC)
Some of them are oh, a whole, complete sentence. *g* Some are finished in draft, but need ground-up revision and rewriting (TSTM is on its fifth or sixth draft, but needs to be completely taken apart and rewritten. I wrote the first draft in 2002. BTMB is pretty much done except I need to change one voice from 1st person to 3rd and do a lot of horrible fussy detail work on it. OEJ&TSK is done in draft, but it needs maybe 10K of a secondary POV added, and it needs the language cleaned up a lot. I also have a complete draft of Bone & Jewel Creatures, except for the climax, because I don't know how it ends....)

So some just need a scene or two added, or a polishing run. I have a complete outline for "Smoke & Mirrors," and four or five major scenes written out of order, but I haven't actually written the story yet.

I think I have about 60K of Chill, and about 11K of Patience & Fortitude. And one sentence of "On Safari...," which is the same one sentence I've had for two or three years now. *g*

And so on.

When I say some of this stuff I've been working on for years, or that I did 12 major drafts of Blood & Iron, which I started originally in 1986.... yeah. This reputation I have for being a fast writer is pretty much unfounded.

*g*

What I do have is a weirdly wired brain with lots of parallel processing slots, which refuses to stick to one topic at a time.
[info]msagara wrote:
May. 10th, 2008 05:25 am (UTC)
When I say some of this stuff I've been working on for years, or that I did 12 major drafts of Blood & Iron, which I started originally in 1986.... yeah. This reputation I have for being a fast writer is pretty much unfounded.

I don't think that word means what you think it means o.O

And I admit that I am now standing in some awe, and feeling suddenly a whole lot less productive.
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 10th, 2008 11:14 am (UTC)
eep. Sorry. That was not my intention! (I'm mostly trying to guilt trip myself into working...)
[info]doortoriver wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
Aaaah this is so encouraging! *sticks into memories as behavior of a diligent writer*
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 12:08 pm (UTC)
Hee. Please be aware, some of these things have been kicking around for decades.

Diligent might not be the right word....
[info]doortoriver wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 08:11 pm (UTC)
Sure it is. :D Since in this context, we'll also say this means "not quitting on things that you know are good, even if they're getting a bit hoary-headed, as it were."

LOL, it inspired ME, anyway. :D
[info]sam_t wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 12:52 pm (UTC)
I will write you now

If you tell me that's in period and/or in character, I won't argue, but the use of 'write you' to mean 'write a letter to you' tends to bring me out of sentences set in historical England with a bit of a bump.

Anyway, that aside, everything sounds very intriguing. I particularly like the sound of 'One-Eyed Jack'.
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:06 pm (UTC)
There's a pun buried in that sentence you may be missing.

Also:

http://www.bartleby.com/70/4632.html

http://www.bartleby.com/70/1652.html

Write you a letter, write me a sonnet. Period usage.
[info]sam_t wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
I may indeed be missing puns. It's been One of Those Days.

However, I'm still inclined to quibble. I don't think that the first one's at all relevant - Pisiano's lines are (while reading a letter): "How! of adultery! Wherefore write you not/What monster’s her accuser?", which is questioning the sender's content, not expressing an intention to send someone a letter, isn't it?

The second example is closer, but I'd maintain that evidence of 'write you a sonnet/letter' is not the same as evidence of 'write you' without an object.

[pause to find entry in OED, further pause to read huge amount of information...]

There are plenty of period or earlier examples of 'I am writing [this letter] to you' and 'He wrote you a letter'. There are also several pre-1900 examples of 'He writes me here, that [etc.]', or 'I beg you will write me word of [etc.]', which is similar but I don't think is the same thing.

The part that seems most relevant is in the section on write With preps., as to (also unto, till), or indirect personal object (cf. 7b). Also const. of.. This includes a few examples from before 1700, such as "Being in hast, have not tyme to wright any body else" (1672, letters of James Ussher), but is listed as rare until c1770; freq. from c1790; often regarded as commercial or colloquial in U.K.; standard in U.S..

Sorry for inflicting my learning process on you there: that's the effect of trying to work, type, and read OED entries simultaneously. Anyway, in conclusion, it turns out that that construction was used at the time, if rarely. I still think that it's likely to be misunderstood by your UK readership, but that may not be a major consideration.
[info]maetang wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 06:07 pm (UTC)
I still think that it's likely to be misunderstood by your UK readership, but that may not be a major consideration.

I'm in the UK, and I understood that just fine.
[info]rosamund wrote:
May. 10th, 2008 12:19 pm (UTC)
Also in the UK and another who gets jolted by the "write you" construction.

Having said that, I think I got the pun. The speaker is going to write about as well as to.

EB (which is what you always are in my head), please feel free to yell if I got that wrong.
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 10th, 2008 12:25 pm (UTC)
That's part of it. ;-)
[info]ztivokreb wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:08 pm (UTC)
I keep meaning to ask you, but on your "must read" list, do you have any Jim Butcher books? (two series, Alrea Codex and Dresden Files)

If not, I think you would find them most entertaining.
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
Jim's a stablemate of mine (we have the same agent.) and I've read several of the Harry Dresden books.

I'm enormously pleased for him and his success.
[info]ztivokreb wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:15 pm (UTC)
He's how I found your books.

[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:17 pm (UTC)
Oh, really? What was the link, if I may ask?
[info]ztivokreb wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:19 pm (UTC)
Oh, no, I meant I was picking up more of his stuff from the store and happened by one of your books a couple shelves above which caught my eye. Soon it was, check if he has something new, check if you have something new...

A new routine was born.
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:25 pm (UTC)
Well, I'm pleased to be linked with him. *g*

You know there's going to be a Dresden Files graphic novel?
[info]ztivokreb wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
really? awesome! the comic geek in me is doing a little dance. (ok, not so little)

I'm waiting for the next Alera Codex book to come out, and it will be a year until the next Dresden novel...

And of course I link you with him, quality sticks with quality.

So you know that this list you have here is basically a big tease? I read the first line, "Ooh, Ok..." but then there's no more. ::sigh::

patience is really not one of my virtues.
[info]tal125 wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:08 pm (UTC)
Okay I'm sleep deprived as all get out but I read your cut link as Wooooooookieeeeeeesss.

I was disappointed there were no wookies. My friday morning demands some wookies. :)

P.S. Reading Blood and Iron atm and am thoroughly enjoying it. :)
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
Here. Have a Wookiee.

*g*

(Glad you are enjoying the book.)
[info]roguemynock wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:32 pm (UTC)
Okay I'm sleep deprived as all get out but I read your cut link as Wooooooookieeeeeeesss.

lol! ms. bear's icon is way more awesome, but i will also offer you some wookiee. :)
[info]roguemynock wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:27 pm (UTC)
Woooooooooooooooorks iiiiiiiiiiiiin progreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssss!

My brain went: Piiiiiiiiiiiiigs iiiiiiiiiiiiiiin spaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaace!
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
As it was meant to!
[info]roguemynock wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:35 pm (UTC)
Oh my lord. Icon love.
[info]matociquala wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:41 pm (UTC)
You can use it if you like. Floyd Pepper was meant to spread his love around.
[info]roguemynock wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 01:55 pm (UTC)
Many many thanks! I am removing a few of mine that I haven't used in forever to make room for new awesomeness. (will credit you of course!)
[info]fiction_theory wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 02:09 pm (UTC)
Chill (Jacob's Ladder 2)

Gah! Now that's just teasing people, that is. :). Especially since I'm just about done with Dust and realizing it's going be a looooooong wait 'til 2009.

At least I'll have the new Promethean Age novel to keep me busy.

And may I just say *wow*? That's quite a few things to juggle.

[info]dancing_crow wrote:
May. 9th, 2008 02:39 pm (UTC)
other people talking about writing
I found this quote in another friend's blog, and it made me think of you and work(s/ing), so I have pasted it wholesale right into the comments and I'll go away and sew now.

"So I took special solace to hear a discussion today on the radio about the new book Off the Page, about writers on writing. The writers talked repeatedly about how you just need to keep working. Richard Bausch teaches his students "You're supposed to be confused. I tell them not to trust it if it feels too easy." Think of it as your day job, he said, and persist in good times and bad. "Every book I've ever written was written a little at a time, over time, in tremendous confusion and doubt.""

before I go I will add I am looking forward to all of these. Any of these. Whatever drops off the tree from ripeness.
[info]neutronjockey wrote:
May. 11th, 2008 07:31 am (UTC)
15.
"The Death of Terrestrial Radio"


I had to come back after letting this one sink in for a couple of days.

This one is made of lurve and win.
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