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always winter

in a garden full of angels you won't ever be alone.

New! Shadow Unit! The first half of "Single Bullet Theory," by Chelsea Polk.

(And some associated backstory)

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Wow. Spooky build-up on the Gamma, but what I love best is seeing Dice happy!

Awesome, can't wait for the next part!
Yeah, seriously.

For me it's not just the happy - but the competent, from the people competent to the running a restaurant / bar competent, to the tech competent. His life is moving.
Which in most fiction would mean that he's now doomed, but our writers are not that predictable.

But no matter what, he's gotten this far. He's got a good job, he's got respect and support. The whole thing with the bike in the backstory just made me tear up.

He's finally got a life beyond dealing with Eddie. Even though he still deals with Eddie, it doesn't seem like that's the whole focus of his life anymore, and that is so good to see!

Love it.

Can't wait for the second half.
oh DICE OH.

*glees*

The permanent sound.

A sweet
little candour
in the youth
of a white
dream, a tender
illusion where
a fine day
appears.....

Francesco Sinibaldi