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writing rengeek magpie mindmatociquala wrote
on March 18th, 2006 at 12:30 pm

Re: "here are foreign coins which are here not foreign"

here are foreign coins which are here not foreign.

That's the phrase I keep returning to, as well. That, and the precision of the detail, and the... I mean it's all a breathless jumble, and you can *see* this scene unfolding from these first few kisses that rapidly grow frantic through absolute immersed blind sweaty tight-eyed passion and not because he tells you about it, but because his command of language is such that he INJECTS IT DIRECTLY INTO YOUR HEAD.

It's all good.

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