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it's a great life, if you don't weaken
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cool writer tricks #75a (or) why Tolkien's longwinded exposition in dialogue works, and yours* don't

Scansion.

Or, because his is epic poetry with the line breaks taken out.


*that's the first-person "you," there, if you** are new around here.

**second-person you
Tags: john ronald reuel, writing craft wank
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