it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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it takes love over gold and mind over matter

the problem of cliche avoidance:

and the gross unfairness struck her
the gross unfairness took her breath away
the gross unfairness was like a blow
the gross unfairness stung
the situation was so grossly unfair she had a hard time breathing around her indignation
she felt rabbit-punched by the gross unfairness of it all
the gross unfairness tackled her, knocked her off her feet, kicked her in the face and ribs a couple of times, and finished her off with a chest stomp. 

"Hey!" she yelped. "That's just not fair!"
Tags: jacob's ladder, the writer at work

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