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rengeek fucking silence

If the answer is infinite light, how come we sleep in the dark?

Progress notes for 20 May 2007

All the Windwracked Stars

New Words:  1,704 really exhausting words
Total Words: 23,264
Deadline: November 1
Reason for stopping: end of the bloody chapter thank god, and out of this stupid flashback. The dirty deed is done. I swear, the passages I'm revising from the old draft are seventeen times harder than the ones I'm writing from scratch. But, I just cut eight pages of pointlessness and replaced it with two paragraphs of expo.

Show, don't tell, is for character development, not always for backstory.

Present-day narrative recommences in Chapter 5.

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
23,264 / 100,000
(23.3%)

Today's words Word don't know:  bioterror, technomantic, holos, cagebirds, nanites, railguns, biotoxins, undercastes, crispbread, epicanthic, galdr, seithr, spae, seeress, volva, unwomanish,
Sustenance: black rice, chicken, orange passionfruit green tea
Mean Things: the government never listens to scientists, and riders never listen to horses.
The Internet is Full of Things: In case you hadn't heard about it, Simon and Schuster is making a huge obscene rights grab.

Comments

woof! the S and S thing is nasty!

Love the wordcounts and the Word unknowns btw.
S&S = shifty and shitty.

but black rice sounds good. how do you make it?
You buy black rice and steam it, and then mix the hot rice with coconut milk and a little sugar.

Yum.
duh.

i forgot there was such a thing as black rice. my brain is in space.
Word doesn't know crispbread nor epicanthic?
I just got the latest Booklist-- have you heard that Carnival is in their list of top 10 SF/Fantasy reviewed between May 2006 and now? In any case, congrats, and it's well deserved.
I had not.

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!