it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
matociquala

and on my deathbed i will pray to the gods and the angels

like a pagan to anyone who will take me to heaven

149,464 words. I begin to think I could probably cut the entire book....

Another way I'm getting mondo words out of this thing is by cutting the reflexive POV-grounding.

Dear Bear, you do not need to constantly say, "He noticed," or "as he had expected--"

It's a bad workshop habit. Get rid of it.

Here, go listen to Andrew Bird. It's coffeeem's fault. This song is utter crack.

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