it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
matociquala

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still is still moving to me

Dear my CE:

"Thou" is the subject form. "Thee" is the object form. When I have properly used "thee" as the object of a sentence, please do not correct it to "thou."

Also, thank you for the good catch on the overuse of the word "languid." And, er. Sorry about the commas. I thought I sprayed.

Love, Bear



I have decided that the 1102 words of outline counts as the second sitting in my writing today, and instead of trying to write more Chill, I will finish this damned CEM tonight.

Send tea.
Tags: walk to the end of the cem
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