with a valium from the bride, it's the devil I love.
98 pages read and revised, four possible plot/thematic points highlighted to pick up later, and a whole bunch of bad sentences tweaked. So far, this is much better than I was afraid, but I fear the broken bit may still be ahead of me.
Still and still, it reads like a novel so far.
Which is good, because that's what it's supposed to be.