it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
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with a valium from the bride, it's the devil I love.

98 pages read and revised, four possible plot/thematic points highlighted to pick up later, and a whole bunch of bad sentences tweaked. So far, this is much better than I was afraid, but I fear the broken bit may still be ahead of me.

Still and still, it reads like a novel so far.

Which is good, because that's what it's supposed to be.

More tomorrow!
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