it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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i try to stay here but my blues go walking around

I wonder if I'm jaded enough to just pretend I read these page proofs. Since I'm kind of scrawling out of my skin right now over how much I want to cut huge chunks of exposition out of the first two chapters. How many times can we explain the same fairly uncomplicated thing?

Sigh. I know. What seems like too much exposition to me is probably actually about half as much as most readers would really prefer. It still makes me keen and rock.
Tags: with my page proofs or on them

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