it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
matociquala

he's just a one-trick pony but he turns that trick with pride

631 words on the devil ponies today, which was very satisfying. I'm still not sure what the A narrative is, but the structure overall is non-trad and calls for a certain amount of stunt writing, which is balancy and fun.

I do know more or less how it comes out in the end, however. So that's something. And the protagonist has a name, which is nice.

Now the story just needs a name, too. Pity there's nothing in "All the Pretty Little Horses" worth swiping except the title, which is overused already.
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