Hmm. There's a bunch of stuff Anne wanted taken out, but I still think I need some of it--it establishes character and motivation, and it's the only place some of the characters get time to shine. I wonder if it will be better if I just kind of trim it down and put it all in one place.
One bit will have to be a flashback. In fact, I think all of ch. 8 will be a giant flashback.
At least it's not a Chapter Two Flashback.
Ah well.
Got that new scene written, and I'm halfway through chapter 8. Now I have to go climb.
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it's a great life, if you don't weaken
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and its hand like a stain is on you still
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