it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
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if you want to sleep a minute on the road, i will steer for you.

Another paragraph seen as it was composed:





Vethulf measured the sky with his eyes.

Vethulf measured the sky. A livid

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold was beginning to spill across the eastern horizon

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold was spilling across the eastern horizon

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold was spilling across the eastern horizon, and the topmost stones on the summit of the fell behind him had begun to glow with the

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold was spilling across the eastern horizon, and the topmost stones on the summit of the fell behind him glowed with the

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold was spilling across the eastern horizon, and the topmost stones on the summit of the fell behind him glowed with the first rays of the sun.

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold spilled across the eastern horizon, and the topmost stones on the summit of the fell behind him glowed with the first rays of the sun.

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold spilled across the eastern horizon, and the topmost stones on the summit behind him glowed with the first rays of the sun.

Vethulf measured the sky. A molten thread of gold spilled across the eastern horizon. The first rays of the sun glowed on the topmost stones of the summit behind him.



And that's why I compose on a word processor rather than longhand or on a typewriter, unless I do not have a computer available. Because hello, linear? Not so much.

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