it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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whisky go easy when the sun goes down

3000 words on Range of Ghosts, bringing me to ~54,000. This section is not thrilling me. On the second draft, maybe I will have figured out how to spice it up, but right now it mostly consists of the characters having a lot of conversations while their author figures out what the hell the plot is and where they need to go next. I do like Mr. Hong, though, and I need to give him more personality on the next draft. I mean, I found some, but I can tell already that he's got more than that going on.

I actually have a lot of characters (Hong, Edene, Hrahima) who need to be more idiosyncratic on the next draft. We'll see how that goes. Right now, I'm just trying to find my way through the labyrinth to the tree in the middle.


If you know what I mean.

Tags: eternal sky, range of ghosts
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