you pour yourself over me like the sun through the blinds.
Well, still no idea what that scene wants. I did break the first chapter in two, though, so now instead of a 50-page chapter I have two 25-page ones. This may screw up my tidy alternating of POV, but such is life. 50 pages is a long time to expect a reader to go without a snack break.
Tomorrow, if I get any time around friend obligations and Riter Duties, I will see if I can get through another chapter or two.