it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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like a rat through a snake

I have just rearranged the first five chapters of this book, which used to be four chapters, and now am doing an editing pass through (new) chapters 2-5. I got through 1 yesterday, which involved adding two new scenes.

Today's transformed sentence:

It had seemed but a small sacrifice at the time. to It seemed but a small sacrifice.

I might still take the but out, but I like it for rhythm.

Tags: range of ghosts, steles of the sky, the writer at work

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