it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
matociquala

it may be good for the soul, but it's hard on the nerves.

Okay. Got all the line-edits and the little fiddles done, and all the notes for the scenes I need to add into the manuscript in the appropriate places. Also cut upwards of 4,000 words that weren't pulling their weight.

So all I need to do now is write those new scenes, make them awesome, and replace a placeholder magic item with something outstanding, and a placeholder magic relationship with something cooler than cool. Oh, and find some way to make the first chapter more exciting. Because somehow the extirpation of a city isn't quite pulling its weight.

Child's play, right?

But right now, I need to go meet my friends for archery.

In other news, truepenny sent the GRD a pterodactyl, and he's ecstatic.
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