it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
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Notes on revising Old Prose:

Too many prepositional phrases make one's prose sound cowardly.

Also. Verbs. I'm glad I've meet a few since 2001.

And man, I used to use a hell of a lot more words than I needed.
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