it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
matociquala

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For everyone who's been asking:

She had rings on her fingers and bells on her shoes
And I knew without asking she was into the blues
She had scarlet begonias tucked into her curls
I knew right away she was not like other girls.

That is efficient characterization (both of observer and observed) and a sharp use of detail.

That is all.
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