it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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The last two scenes I wrote were in mostly moderately tight 3pl, except the dolly in. There wasn't much need to shift focal length, though. and my narrator is in general naturally self-effacing: she prefers to go unnoticed, and I doubt she's ever going to make her identity manifest, although I know very well who she is and what she's doing.

Still, it feels weird. But I think it reads all right.

And Don's a good cop. He figures things out quite usefully.

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Progress notes for 13 April 2005

Whiskey & Water

New Words: 1,492 (Columbus sailed the ocean blue)
Total Words: 34,343
Pages: 155

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34,343 / 160,000

Reason for stopping: Work, end of chapter
Mammalian Assistance: Marlowe. Pushy. A Lot.
Stimulants: tea, seltzer, inscrutable oriental candy
Exercise: walk later, maybe?
Mail: nomail
Tyop du jour: It didn't make him feel clean, and neither did the sower.
Darling du jour: Àine stood on the battlements of a white castle in Faerie, and held up her hands to the moon.
Books in progress, but not at all quickly: Ed Sanders, Tales of Beatnik Glory; Neal Stephenson, Quicksilver
Interesting research tidbit of the day: Stagolee Shot Billy -- Speaking of the folk process, there's a cool-looking book.
Other writing-related work: pondering piles of research books I want to order.

I should probably not buy these today.

What I should probably do is buy them when I sell the Promethean Age books, so I can have them for the revisions. That would be the grownup thing to do. Instead of ordering them, and then laying them out on the floor to roll around on.

Although, you know, there's a real unholy joy in the idea of ordering two books on the Gnostic gospels, one book on the evolution of the Bible, and three books on Christopher Marlowe at the same time.

You know, some of these would have been very useful to have when I was writing The Stratford Man. As if I didn't do enough reading for that damned thing already.

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