it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
matociquala

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Go for the burn.

When did I learn to write?

I'm on page 60 or so of "Stars," staring the revision monster in the face... and reading Feynman in my spare time to catch his voice for when I go kick the stuffing out of "Hammered" later on.... and sometime in the past twelve months, I appear to have learned how to write.

On a sentence level, I mean.

Man.

Some of this stuff is *rough.* ::Winces:: at need to establish POV every three words. ::Flinches:: at comma problem. Oh, bloody hell. Those paragraph transitions.

::Rolls up sleeves and gets to work.::
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