I'm working on the Blood & Iron revisions. You know, not only do I write better now than I did when I last working on this book (god, the sentence level work. is ass.) but it just occured to me that the earliest version of this scene--the first meeting of Kelpie and Seeker--is eighteen years old.
It's old enough to vote.
It's been rewritten at least eleven times that I can think of. And large chunks of it are getting white-papered this time, because it has no line of direction at all.