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bear by san

It's annoying that as I learn to write better, my old stuff refuses to retroactively repair itself to the new standard.

The good news is, I'm getting a ton of scaffolding out of this stuff. It's amazing how inarticulate some of this is. Seventeen words used where I needed three.

This is a good thing, because Liz also wants a bunch of stuff explained more patently that I more or less inclued very subtly in the first version. It's *in* there, but it's latent rather than patent. So I need space to do that in. (Assuming I can do it subtly enough to not have it suck a lot.)

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excelsior?

Just to let you know: the little dictionary that lives in my PalmPilot (R) has only one definition for excelsior - Soft wood shavings used for stuffing , packing, etc.
Perhaps you meant this.
Life is good.
MTF
DD2

Re: excelsior?

Excelsior as a cry mean,s sort of, Onwards! Upwards! Huzzah! like that *g*
"It's annoying that as I learn to write better, my old stuff refuses to retroactively repair itself to the new standard."

AMEN.