I went back over those troublesome early chapters again, added what will hopefully be the necessary internalizations, cut about a thousand words and added them all back in. I'm still hard up against my word limit... but I'm finding less to tweak as the book goes on.
Of course, if I am a lucky Bear, I will have a nice note from
I also just reread the first chapter of the rough draft of Carnival, and man it needs work.
Fortunately, I have the time to give it some.
:)
Re: book recs?
Re: book recs?
---L.
Re: book recs?
---L.
Re: book recs?
Douglas Adams has beaten us all
---L.
half a book onward,
All in the valley of ink
wandered the mind of Bear.
Forward the writing bent!
Have something for th'agent
Into the valley of ink
plunged on the mind of Bear.
Forward the writing bent!
Take what the muse has sent
Her darlings decedent
Sparing no kind of care.
Charged on through writer's block,
Boldly she wrote no schlock,
Returned illiterates' mock
Into the valley of ink
Danced on the mind of Bear.
Critics to right of her,
critics to left of her,
critics in front of her
gave her some kind of stare.
Storm'd at with damn and hell
Nominees who'd written well
All eyes on the Campbell
Into the valley of ink
Charged on the mind of Bear.
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(I don't usually write doggerel, but my punchy mind latched on to "half a book done" this morning, and produced this. Hope you don't mind.)