it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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swigging gin and swinging that machete

Chapter 2 bites the dust. Eight pages added, five pages cut. Current total stands at 465 pages. I got that scene to do everything I thought I needed two scenes to do. I may need one more scene with these people to give them some more weight in the narrative, but I dunno what good it would do me plotwise.
Tags: b&@k hate, carnival

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