And then there's fixing this stupid scene that Peter said was stupid, and he's right. Darn you, Peter! Darn you to heck! *shakes puny fist in the general direction of Toronto*
Soliloquys are a zero-time action!
Anyway. I think I fixed the various small problems. Now, onward into the actual rewriting.
Hopefully, I've fixed the other scene here that wasn't working, and made it plainer that Our Heroes get away with what they get away with because they're being abetted by the individual who they think they're running game on.
I figure it's a spy novel, I get one abandonment-to-a-death-trap for free.