it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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truepenny, who is betareading Undertow for me, suggests an eventual spinoff: a Ranid-Humen phrase book.

"Do you know any stories?"

"I regret that I do not understand what you are saying."

"My personal biology is quite complicated."

(this is funnier in context, as communication, biological, and cultural differences are sort of epidemic in this story. but funny enough on its own, I think.)

Progress notes for 13 May 2006:

Because there is no angst in Undertow, (there are certainly situations worthy of angst, but none of the characters seem prone to angsting) my backbrain has to feed its craving for melodrama and sex by giving me chunks of other books.

So, last night when I should have been sleeping, I had to keep turning on the light to write bits and bobs of what eventually turned into a scene from Stars in which Mingan is contemplating hiring a rentboy.

...yes, that rentboy, for those of you who saw the initial version. The one Muire doesn't like to admit is a rentboy.

My characters cannot win for losing, I tell you what.

Anyway, 735 words of possibly the most masochistic internal dialogue I HAVE EVER WRITTEN, revolving around a character sitting in a bar, licking his lips.

Creepy motherfucker. I can't remember the last time one of my characters actually *shocked* me.

The good news is, this icon fits both books rather nicely. Except for the part where Stars as all genocide.


New Words: 370 (another light day, but only to be expected, as I've not much time to work on it and I've hit the Dreaded Middle Of The Book and need to figure out how the transition from establishing things to developing them is going to run.)
Total Words: (actual wordcount / manuscript) 36,488 / 40,750
Pages: 163
Deadline: August 1
Words per day to meet deadline: 794 (eee, it's going up again.)
Reason for stopping: time to get ready to leave.

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
36,488 / 100,000

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
163 / 400

Stimulants:  pomegranate black tea
Exercise:  none
Mail: nomail
Today's words Word don't know:  n/a
Words I'm surprised Word do know: n/a
Mean Things: Um. What Mingan is doing to himself and everyone around him. Also, over in Undertow, Moon just dropped a bombshell on Timothy.
Tyop du jour:  n/a
Darling du jour: n/a
Books in progress: Wendy Moore, The Knife Man;
Interesting tidbit of the day: n/a
Other writing-related work: n/a
The glamorous life of the writer: I scrubbed the kitchen counters. Oh, yay.
Tags: progress notes, undertow

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