it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken

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the horror of page proofs.

God this is a terrible sentence. Why did none of you make me fix this sentence in draft?

"Ambient radiance glowed from the walls."

What is that shit?

*contemplates anything the same size that might be better*

Ambient light radiated, maybe. At least then the radiance isn't glowing.

Because what the frell else is radiance going to do? Radiate? Snog?
Tags: b&@k hate, carnival, revision wingeing
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