it's a great life, if you don't weaken (matociquala) wrote,
it's a great life, if you don't weaken
matociquala
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  • Music: The Offspring - Not the Ones

a review this negative deserves its very own entry

Proof I'm not stacking the deck in favor of the favorable reviews, right here. (Slight spoilers, and Matthew is stung by the description of himself.)

Ouch. Sorry about that, man. I mean, yeah, they're not a lovable bunch, but I didn't mean to bore you. *g*

On the other hand, his plot synopsis is one of the better ones I've read. A careful reader! Do I really do that dialogue thing? Because I'm used to getting yelled at for breaking up my dialogue with way too many action tags. Hmm.

*stares at Undertow suspiciously.*
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