You see, Whiskey & Water is in third person omniscient. Including POV shifts within paragraphs--indeed, within sentences, in some cases--and long sections where it focuses down to follow one character, and passages given in sweeping overview by an objective external narrator...
...and she's very diligently pointed out all the POV shifts.
I feel really, really guilty right now.
That said, page 164 had no red on it except for typesetter's instructions. I am pretty proud of that.
I owe her a drink. Or maybe a nice cup of chamomile.